dude seriously I like this fanfic of yours. but your chapter uploading is very slow. upload 3 chapter by week or 4 if possible. your already losing many readers . seriously if you have done kept stable chapter uploading then you will earn more vote man . and more readers ♥️
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Fantasy · Warcry_Ayms
if you don't want to read an stupid MC . who have an op system but don't know how to use it probably . then don't read this. this will just make you very angry. for the new reader . you can read it. but for old readers avoid it . massage for the author. you should make your MC smart and don't force plot . your plot is very very forced . I hate idiot MC.
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really like the story . but helpings the girl in bus . is kind ya lame to me. . it like quit force you know. instead you could have done that MC saves the beauty in last moment. also give some point why he have to save her or need her there when you try to save someone. otherwise most reader's in webnovel will give you an tons of comments. like why did you save her dude. why your MC is so naïve. etc . man I hope you fix it. which you Did in chapter 8 and 9 explain why he need them . but that's way to late. most readers don't have that kind of time to waste on . but few do . anyway your work and idea used in this novel is very good .
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shite Chinese urban fucking shite novel 🤬🤬🤬🤬. just ruin my mood . god damn it . I wish who the hell the author wrote this just drop his writing as Carrier. fellow readers don't read this thing. I warned you . this will kill your mind and soul . to make you so much angry that you want to kill the man who wrote it. ...........................................
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I would really be glad if you could tell me the name of the novel . because I can't find it in the MTL 🙂
(HIATUS) There's no way I gain their abilities if they like me.
Movies · RagingDebtColektor