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It's an interesting story, world, and magic. It's just the absolute lack of grammar, and many sentences make no sense. Also, the pay wall is way too early, especially for the quality and length of the chapters. The characters are decent, but half the time, you can't understand their intentions or emotions because of the poor writing.

All around a pretty poor novel, writing quality is terrible at best. Characters are flat if they aren't just projected thoughts. The novel isn't finished, and although it plays with some very cool concepts the attempt just doesn't hit the mark.

Perfectly paced, witty comments, and just the right amount of advantage. it's the goldilocks of cheat novels.

So he just said, " You guys read it for me, comment it cause I cant read it or copy what the synopsis says in a convoluted way"?

It's a great start to the novel, overall I would suggest anyone who's into anything close to it read it. I won't state out the largest flaw which is the size of the ongoing series cause it is simply out of the author's control. My only critique is the character interactions seem so underdeveloped that I only attempt to get into combat scenes. I still would love to have someone to suggest this novel to cause it is overall great.

Im so glad I read the replies. Who knew you can find entertainment in the replies of a review about a topic of entertainment.

It's great for anyone who wants that modern touch in a novel, but by the 40th chapter it just doesn't feel like the characters are there anymore. You can't emotions from text and even the emotion descriptions don't help at some point. They don't feel like well grounded characters.