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thank you for this review, helped me save some hours in my life

the attitude being different is not the real issue. What i dont understand is why you chose to have naruto train with jiraya for 1 month when he had 3 hokages available to train him. At the beginning you had a great concept but for me you let it down by having the 3 hokages have less input in narutos trraining. You were different from the other fan fics.

The MC is naruto who comes across the ghosts of the 1st, 2nd and 4th hokages. Naruto does not have the personality of naruto at all, He is ruthless even though he is being trained by the 1st and 4th hokages. Also i stopped reading up until the the chununexam finals solely because the author makes the mc go and train summoning jutsu and rasengan from jiraya for one month. Why? i have no idea and its quite stupid seeing how for 6 months he was being trained by 3 former hokages. One of whom was the god of ninjas, one who created 90% of all the forbidden jutsus and the final one who created the bloody rasengan. But author makes mc go and train with jiraya when he has all these guys availa

Funny how there are people justifying an author writing a pedo character as " this is fan fic and this is what you should expect" or " If you dont like it dont read it". all i can say to those people is whats the difference between you people who enjoy reading this pedo filth and those who watch it? to me you people are the same kinds of people because you enjoy underage child sexploitation. No reasoing or excuses can justify it.