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Can more people do warhammer, SCP, and hazbin/helluva boss ff's please?

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Hey author the novel is doing really well. My only nitpick is the grammatical issues. The main issues I see are that adjectives, adverbs, and proper verb tenses are not being properly utilized.

Hence, I asked my parents for their approval to let me practice all forms of combat weapon skill. They accepted my wish and my father ordered 5 guards who were specialized in 5 different weapon skills: sword, hammer, bow and arrows, spear and axe to train me. All of them were greatly impressed at how incredible fast I learned at my young age.

TBATE: The Emissary

TBATE: The Emissary

Anime & Comics · DaoistvZHdIQ

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fr, the world only needs to make sense within the confines of the logic of that world.

He was sold to the military by his own parents when he was just a child, raised by the military and spent his life training, obeying orders, going to the battle fields, killing dozens of people. With the prize that he would get to survive for another day.....

TBATE: The Emissary

TBATE: The Emissary

Anime & Comics · DaoistvZHdIQ

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Ig that's how it is when an unfamiliar skeleton walks in your turf with a makeshift club

'Lets wait for—' Before I could finish that thought, the ratman immediately spotted me and charged toward me with its club raised. Without hesitation, I lifted my rebar club, ready to strike when it came within range.

Call Me Brook

Call Me Brook

TV · chaoticCatholic

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I recommend deciding ASAP about harem or not because you will be crucified if you don't and the radical readers have already been attached to the MC.

In a world divided by the elements, four nations thrived: the Earth Kingdom, the Water Tribes, the Air Nomads, and the Fire Nation. Among them, the Fire Nation blazed with ambition and martial prowess, fueled by the flames of war.

ATLA: The Fire Avatar

ATLA: The Fire Avatar

Anime & Comics · SIeepyDreamerr

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fr dogs indeed since they get around so much

Second are actually two things: nectar and ambrosia, the drink and food of the dogs. Apparently, if normal mortals consume any of the two, their blood turns to fire and bones to sand, so I can't tell you if it tastes good or not, but they assured me it did. They can heal your wounds, but be sure not to eat too much!

PJO: Nightcrawler

PJO: Nightcrawler

Book&Literature · NyanTa

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Murder chicken is redundant since chickens are all cannibalistic murderhobos. My mom grew up on a farm, and she says when they slaughtered chickens, the others would gather around the splattered viscera and eat it.

"Oww who's my adorable murder chicken it's you.", the man cooed while scratching gently behind the start of one of the neural queues like one would scratch behind the ear of their dog if the purring and feeling of commencement was an indicator Gladius liked it.

Avatar: A lost survivor on Pandora

Avatar: A lost survivor on Pandora

Movies · The_Bip_Boop2003

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bro burned him worse than his dad burned him

Staring at him, Zuko replied "I don't need schemes to beat you and capture the Avatar, and I am not helping you, I am paying respect to a fellow disciple. You should just be grateful that you ended up profiting out of it."

Madara in the Avatar World

Madara in the Avatar World

Anime & Comics · KojiSan

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Precaution is not cowardice. Being brave does not mean being stupid.

Myles weighed his options, feeling torn between risking the unknown and risking the explosion of his powers. He knew that he needed to act fast before it was too late. He finally made up his mind and said, "I'll do it. I don't want to be a ticking time bomb."

Tachyon: Rise to villainy

Tachyon: Rise to villainy

Anime & Comics · StoryCraft

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his mama was the giant btw

"A half-giant? How did that happen..." curiously murmured the bushy-haired girl.

Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Grandson

Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Grandson

Book&Literature · NyanTa

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nice

"Have you seen a toad, a boy named Neville lost one," said the girl, looking at me, before blushing embarrassedly. 'Is there something on my face?' I thought.

Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Grandson

Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Grandson

Book&Literature · NyanTa

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he smiling cuz he's remembering how dumbles spread his cheeks so long ago

"But Hogwarts is hailed as the best magical school. Not only that, you'll have the current most powerful wizard in the world as your headmaster." said their grandfather, with a small smile.

Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Grandson

Harry Potter: Grindelwald's Grandson

Book&Literature · NyanTa

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same power level just different SKILL level, anyone can use a hammer and nail to destroy a block of stone, but not anyone can carve a masterpiece

"It's all in the feet," Caitlin explains, getting excited. "Tachyon's feet are spending less time on the ground and, theoretically, propelling himself much faster. His speed is currently ten times faster than yours."

Tachyon: Rise to villainy

Tachyon: Rise to villainy

Anime & Comics · StoryCraft

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Understandable circumstances it's just really annoying to literally see typos in almost EVERY paragraph and the author doesn't do anything about it

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