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(ps still got 5 likes yo)

i dont, just want to complain though, otherwise i would have just said something like: it sucks, shit story or something like that. I wanted to explain EXACTLY what I personally do not like. What the author does with that is his own right, however when you post something online you open it up to other people therefor such people also have a right to their opinion. Your hatred for my previous comment quite baffels me to be honest, ive seen much much harder critique than mine. I even added i loved the story, just found it ashame what hes doing with his main character. Next time you want to bash someone for a bad opinion about a story You personally like, perhaps take a better look at the comment, not all bad opinions stem from a desire to tear an author down, rather a desire to see a story improve. (p.s not all good opinions are worth while, plenty of times i myself was not satisfied with what i wrote and everyone praised me, but that one honest bloke told me what HE personally did not like and it improved MY writing by miles. Yeay sayers do not improve your craft)

Aaahh. yes i can see that happening yeah, i hope you have the time to do so because i do very much enjoy your work and i believe with that little bit of extra attention it will be absolutly awesome. Its already really good, but if you can than also read it without a flow blocker it will be an absolute binger✌🏻

the dutch still have a monarchy, theyre limited in power but they still there

Great story mate, really cool. Just one thing, you have a tendency to just up and go into a new scene. Like this episode with the whole talk with laxus, it feels like you left that scene right after zoldaris retorts to laxus. The whole timing feels off, it truelly feels like from one sentence to the other your suddenly somewhere else. No retort from laxus? no responce? Nothing against you or your book, i really enjoy reading this work of art.

thats a high assumption and an incorrect one, but when you tend to have a very strict schedule and suddenly something within that schedule no longer fits, you tend to notice. As i told the author my comment was never meant in a critical or negative way, it was at all times but an observation.

I meann...your still getting my daily powerstones and any golden tickets. And im very sorry it came out as a complaint it wasnt meant that way. I actually enjoy your story very much and have been reading for a long time now. The comment was meant as an observation, i simply noticed it happening. I didnt mean it in any negative or critical way and im very sorry you felt that way. I wish you a blessed day and once again im very sorry.

i know right, i once said hes uploading less but i was denied. Well a month ago it was 11 chapters a week, today its 10 chapters a week. But i remember the times when it was 14 a week if not more... Soon we will recieve a chapter a day and who knows maybe well stagnate to a chapter a week. Bloody hope not but still it possible

i once said your uploading less and less, you told me its not true. Now a month ago you uploaded 11 chapters a week which is less than the 2 a day to 14 a week you used to do. But now your down to 10 a week. So tell me, are you reaching the end and slowing it down? Tell me, how did we go from 14 a week to 10...

Soooo....he's magneto? You make him sound incredibly overpowered, but he's basically magneto. Also i think the original author overestimates the usefellness of metal aswell as the amount of metal actually used. In the end, muh... half an idea that was thoughtlessly put together under the premise, i want it so it'll happen. Without a thought about the actual workings of said ideas.

"I DO WHAT I WANT!" 👌🏻✌🏻Love it mate, your story you do you

its not about morals mate, everyone has morals even serial killers. There's are just different from yours, but they still have them. Its about him thinking shes meaning him a pet infront her parents, even though a blind mole could see thats not true. im just getting sick and ducking tired of people making intelligent characters, denser then steel. Its not funny, it never has been. also just a side note, when i read your excuse that its cuz of his "morals" i laughed so hard i fell of the couch, terrible excuse mate, simply horrid excuse.

yeah the app is just being annoying as hell, yesterday i couldnt read any further today i finished off my fast passes. Seriously this site sometimes😅

i know right☺️

simply loved this chapter, take back my entire thing earlier. This chapter👌🏻pure gold✌🏻

seriously mate, its becoming quitte annoying how much of a puss he is, i mean i get the whole wanting to keep the friendship safe thing, but its starting to feel more like an excuse to keep the romance off for as long as possible and less like a part of whom he is....that sucks mate, love the story though very interresting.

yeah i feel like its the site, its just normally when i wake up theres a new chapter, now the new chapter comes around dinner.

is it just me or is the new chapter taking longer?