Webnovel Author: II_Dandy_II - Fanfic Collection

The author is improving his writing it seems which is ok. The only problem I have is in the early chaps when the Trauma the MC supposedly had has no explaination. Not to mention the way he loves his father was getting a little creepy at first. Overall it could be better but still a good read imo.

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Good Story. Too much nerfing. Powers are also a bit too much with being able to bestow and customize race and such. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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-MC is a Symbiote with additional Abilities to help gain more power. -Grammar and Spelling is Great and Understandable. -Early Chapters/Story is not that good but not too bad. -MC's IQ is often times unstable during the early part of the story through the middle and gets clearer overtime. -Description of MC's appearance is almost non-existent sometimes and only being mentioned if seen by other people or if being narrated from 3rd POV. -Would be better is they now MC is an alien in my opinion since personally do not like being called an inferior creature like a mutant if he is a superior alien lifeform(Opinion Only). -Story gets a little confusong sometimes. -MC gets underestimated most of the time but does not mind it. -Would be better if MC was a little more prideful of his species rather than hiding it from other weaker people(Opinion Only) *Overall Great Read but short chaps. MC's personality and attitude is good but sometimes it does not fit my cup of tea. Story Progress/Development is Understanable but confusong at times* (Suggest defining MC more-Appearance in Human and Symbiote form or Hybrid Form. Being confident in his own species rather than hiding it most of the time from weaker people. Understandable story despite the definition being "Tendril this Tendril that" in fight scenes it makes it a little boring with my imagination needing a more definite explanation) -Still a Good Read-

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