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This is exactly how I envisioned this scene, heat!

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I slouched a little and then I began widening my arms back again like a music conductor, my voice came out high-pitched as I felt the ecstasy seeping in whilst mana escaped me, "Transcendental Art: Threads of Death!"

Reincarnation of a Failed Author: I Hate Clichés

Reincarnation of a Failed Author: I Hate Clichés

Fantasy · ItsHashi

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What a beautiful way to describe this beautiful scenery.

The vista of trees fluttered with the slightly chilly wind, and an orange halo marked the west horizon. The sun looked absolutely gorgeous as it waved farewell to the entire world.

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After the "ok" add a comma, and don't type it as ok, but okay--"Okay," she whispered....Just a slight correction and advice :))

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