Navya_1803 - Profile

Thank you for you review. I will try to use word which non- Indians would me more familiar with. About the issues you pointed out, I know that you are right and at some point I have also realized that. Right now I am trying to edit the previous chapter so that it doesn't seem that I have rushed the story. In the upcoming chapters I will slowly show how Karna is trying to bring changes. He will slowly try to change the society and face many problems during it. It may seem that Karna is not facing any problem in his life right now but don't worry I have decided something about it. I am just trying to create a base for the story first so that you all could connect mire with the characters. There will be a twist after the Panchal war so wait for that. I am trying to show that in life everything will go just fine and the suddenly all the problems will come. One will even not be able to realise how it all happened, same will happen with the Kuru family in this story. Thank you once again for reading this story and pointing out the mistakes.

Thank you for reading this book. Sorry for the slow updates but my offline classes have started so I don't get enough time to write. I will try to publish more chapters as soon as I can.

Thank you for reading this book. I am sure that there will be one chapter where Pandavs will discuss about Karna.

I will publish more chapters from next weekt. I am busy with my assignments so am unable to update the chapters.

I will update tomorrow.