yeah same as other comments. we don't care about the filler math and honestly it annoys. makes it sound like a work problem, and we read to disconnect from that.
According to this, the total cost would come down to 17,200 AC.
Fantasy · NoendHorizon
when did he meet raven?
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Fantasy · Exxs
the level 1's in the first chapter had 100 hp. this is just failure to pay attention to detail
she can't interact with him or objects how did she nudge him? more like she whispered in his ear
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Fantasy · PP_Qwarts
all but the last 4 paragraphs repeated from last chapter ?
How long is this speaking style going to last? feels to exaggerated and doesn't flow smoothly. honestly it makes it hard to read for me
Gazing upon the two stunning women dozing serenely beside him, he wore a wistful expression and addressed them in a resigned tone, "The predicament I find myself in is how to depart without disturbing their slumber. Given their intertwined sleeping arrangements, it appears to be an arduous feat to accomplish. Sigh!"
Fantasy · LittleBastard879
Maths not mathing. First wolf gave 50 exp and he needed 100 exp for level 2. Wouldn’t 5 exp/ wolf and 20 kills make more sense for a starter zone?
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Games · Nicrest_
No he released their seals the smack the old lady around
"This time, you both made breakthroughs, advancing two ranks. Not bad at all!"
Eastern · Yi Chenxi
No need for ominous. How it's written perfectly conveys that they are irrelevant and not worth the extra effort
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Fantasy · wook_allenworker
honestly I skipped the whole chapter. whole thing was filler to me
Absolute Beast Dominion
Fantasy · NoendHorizon