nghtwlkr

nghtwlkr

male LV 15
2021-05-19 Joined Global
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nghtwlkr
nghtwlkr
2 months ago
Commented

honestly I skipped the whole chapter. whole thing was filler to me

nghtwlkr
nghtwlkr
2 months ago
Commented

yeah same as other comments. we don't care about the filler math and honestly it annoys. makes it sound like a work problem, and we read to disconnect from that.

According to this, the total cost would come down to 17,200 AC.

Absolute Beast Dominion

Absolute Beast Dominion

Fantasy · NoendHorizon

nghtwlkr
nghtwlkr
3 months ago
Commented

when did he meet raven?

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My SSS-Rank Grim Reaper System

My SSS-Rank Grim Reaper System

Fantasy · Exxs

nghtwlkr
nghtwlkr
5 months ago
Commented

the level 1's in the first chapter had 100 hp. this is just failure to pay attention to detail

nghtwlkr
nghtwlkr
6 months ago
Commented

she can't interact with him or objects how did she nudge him? more like she whispered in his ear

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My Supreme Magus System

My Supreme Magus System

Fantasy · PP_Qwarts

nghtwlkr
nghtwlkr
6 months ago
Commented

all but the last 4 paragraphs repeated from last chapter ?

nghtwlkr
nghtwlkr
9 months ago
Commented

How long is this speaking style going to last? feels to exaggerated and doesn't flow smoothly. honestly it makes it hard to read for me

Gazing upon the two stunning women dozing serenely beside him, he wore a wistful expression and addressed them in a resigned tone, "The predicament I find myself in is how to depart without disturbing their slumber. Given their intertwined sleeping arrangements, it appears to be an arduous feat to accomplish. Sigh!"

My Celestial Ascension

My Celestial Ascension

Fantasy · LittleBastard879

nghtwlkr
nghtwlkr
10 months ago
Commented

Maths not mathing. First wolf gave 50 exp and he needed 100 exp for level 2. Wouldn’t 5 exp/ wolf and 20 kills make more sense for a starter zone?

nghtwlkr
nghtwlkr
10 months ago
Replied to Mudd

No he released their seals the smack the old lady around

"This time, you both made breakthroughs, advancing two ranks. Not bad at all!"

Checking in for 100,000 Years

Checking in for 100,000 Years

Eastern · Yi Chenxi

nghtwlkr
nghtwlkr
10 months ago
Commented

No need for ominous. How it's written perfectly conveys that they are irrelevant and not worth the extra effort