Interesting premise. I would have loved to have read more
ch 0 1 Prologue
Horror 路 LexWhitlock
Yep, something was a little off with Ronaldo...
ch 189 Knew it!
Fantasy 路 Fairn
Ha, ha... becoming a little less human as the time wears on.... (Change your body give up your heart give up your soul... give up control to the voices in your head...I digress, lol) Now if there's a creepy ghost not like the others, I would say maybe try attacking the creepy ghost. I'll bet he's the one actually at fault. At first, I thought he wasn't like the universe cuz he hadn't been there as long. But as Link grew suspicious, I changed my mind. Quick call the Ghostbusters! 馃ぃ
ch 187 The Mysterious Tower (4)
Fantasy 路 Fairn
Interesting chapter! I can't wait to see or hear who's talking!; I also noticed that you called him Red - after so many chapters not using the name you might confuse readers. Small grammar error: weary : means tired. Wary means cautious. 馃檪 Easy to confuse them.
ch 184 The Mysterious Tower (1)
Fantasy 路 Fairn
Hopefully he won't get his team killed in the name of "training." A good leader also knows when he needs to step in, especially when he hasn't lifted a finger yet. Besides I'm starting to like these people - which probably isn't good since the secondary characters all seem to die 馃槀
ch 181 Demon Knight (1)
Fantasy 路 Fairn
Nice action in this chapter and the last.
ch 172 The Demon Captain (2)
Fantasy 路 Fairn
Interesting story from Adrian. Wondering where this is going...
ch 169 The Fallen King (2)
Fantasy 路 Fairn
With all of the description of what was being done to the poor young man, why would you blot out this word? It dilutes what the rescuer/friend is screaming right now. Rape. If you're going to describe it and use other profanity, then use the word.
Appetite! [BL]
Realistic 路 Phodoodles