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I became curious as to why the author combined long texts into one and did not create gaps for several lines for paragraph

I've only read 3 chapters and this makes me interested, but what I don't like is the writing of the author doesn't use spacing in each paragraph and almost combines each paragraph together. and to be honest, it made me quite confused when reading, and made me feel lazy about reading some things that I felt weren't important

Well, I don't know what to write, the overall storyline feels a bit strange, like everything is going too smoothly, well... However, I quite liked this novel, so don't drop it, because the story made me interested(I'm in a situation where I'm running out of novels that I can read)

Is this worth reading? Well I guess it would be feasible since the idea is to use a red scarab like a blue beetle However, I don't recommend it because the writing is messy, I would recommend it if the writer learned the basics of how to write a story. How to use punctuation and more

The writing is chaotic, there is no distinction between narrative and dialogue between characters, even the author's notes are not marked to separate the contents of the novel, really messy and made me lazy to read because it made me confused when reading between narrative and dialogue, sorry if the other ratings are low but that's what I can conclude when reading the first few lines of the chapter due to the chaotic writing

Hope you guys like it, because I'm a beginner writer and still not very good at writing novels, so please advise and criticize................................................................

this is a good story, i like it and in the beginning i was interested in this story, i hope the update of this story is stable. And I also feel that it's better to omit the quotations at the beginning of the chapter