Webnovel Author: GlacialWolf - Novel Collection

Don't let it get to you. I know that English is a hard language to master especially for writing because of all the unspoken rules. I'm unsure if you're first language is English but I saw that you did try hard to write without mistakes. I hope you write more and give me a good story to read. I'll be waiting for each new chapter

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Nice. I got to say, I like where this is going. You're writing is actually pretty good compared to some of the other stuff I've read and I hope you keep it up! Reading your work made me realize that I should be focusing on both of my stories instead of this, but this was too good to pass up. By the way, what's your release schedule looking like?

Hello, I read through your first 4 chapters and I'm quite pleased. Your world building, storyline and prologue are excellent. Compared to some of the other works I've read, I can tell that you plan and are a good writer. The only criticism that I can give you is that there are times where your syntax and verbs are a little messed up. For example, there should be times where words should be switched around like "forever loner" should be "loner forever" which are common mistakes. There are also times where you switch between present tense verbs and past tense in the same paragraph making the reading seem a little off. However! These are the only issues I had with the text and I found that the rest was very good. Please continue writing because you are definitely getting somewhere with this story! :)

Hello! I read through 4 chapters so far and I have to say that I'm impressed. Your writing style and grammar are above an beyond what I'm used to seeing. It contained a lot of personality and genuine effort. I have to be honest that I have little reading experience when it comes to novels of this type (0 LGBTQ+ books read so far) so I canto comment on how it fares to it's competition in the genre at large. I must be honest and say that I was a little uncomfortable reading this as a guy, but please don't let that distract you and keep writing!! Good luck and Have a good time!

Yeah I know personally that it's difficult to find inspiration for a novel. Keep up the good work and I hope you post soon!