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review at ch 47 The pacing and characters are well written. I do see that this takes on a strong Japanese novel type of writing where the male mc is a oblivious/effortless lady killer while still being timid or cautious. This is still the beginning of the novel, so MC still has a bit of his naive side while the FL is gushing over his everything with rose tinted glasses (including his kindness). He doesn't really support fighting and he doesn't want to kill. I do hope he gets over his kindness or naive mindset. He doesn't want revenge (where I read), but just wants to avoid the main characters despite them despising and trying to tarnish him. In turn, I'm waiting for the MC to grow a backbone to get things done and have some charisma. Good read, but I am frustrated with this character at the moment. If this is what the author had in mind though... it's working.

author, the story is categorized as fantasy romance?

thank you for saying this in advance author. I shall read now

Writing Quality 4 - There are some grammar errors here and there, but not too bad. Story Development 3 - I feel like each world and the progress should have been developed more. There was some information that seemed like it was lacking and the MC goes through worlds pretty quickly. The hosts will have an abusive family or non likeable characters surrounding him before OP MC will come and face slap them. For the first world with the parents, it could have been questionable at first since it was the villain that told this information to the host but MC already knew. I'd have also preferred for the MC and ML's relationship to further develop first. MC seemed to have been enchanted first and then after some paragraphs ML became an obsessive wife slave. Happy that ML didn't immediately have "the pull and attraction" for MC doing nothing and just walking into the room during the first meeting, but author didn't elaborate more on this point. Update Stability 5 - novel is completed World Background 4 - Author gives a quick overview of the setting and world background. Character Design 3 - the characters strongly remind me of other world hopping BL novels which I'm assuming this novel is based off of or was inspired by. MC and ML also tend to give vinegar to each other quite often knowing and unknowingly. I can smell it across the screen. Overall 3.8 for me. This is a good novel and I'd still recommend giving it a try for those that like the MC going through worlds quickly, but him and ML don't have much character development. Both are already OP and spicy scenes are good.

Good, short, and simple story about a dominant female and her timid husband that needs patient caring

thank you for letting us know! saves some of us

I will be that reader... hope it's 1v1 romance with no sides or harem around (praying*)