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Ye what I meant it updates on the same day each week on Sunday lol

Btw the reason the MC reminds me of Johnny is because Johnny was rude and mean yet kinda smart but can be dumb. MC is straight forward to be rude, is pretty smart and can be dumb. Both have disability in the leg to which they had to use a wheelchair and both had something/somebody to help with the injury they had. The only difference was Johnny was shot in somewhere that wasn't in the leg but stopped it from really doing anything while the MC had a tree fallen on him crushing his leg bones or something like that. I really kinda want to know if Johnny and MC were suppose to be alike or at least if you know Johnny.

Writing Quality: 5: The quality is good and I don't remember any bad grammer, or wrong spelling. Updating Stability: 5: The Stability of updating is good as it update at the same day each day from the chapters I seen so far. Story Development: 5: The development is not super quick nor super slow. Very nice and chill Character Design: 5: Victor who is the mc and like the only oc is designed kinda good. I just don't know if he is dumb or smart and makes me feel very weird but thats just my opinion. However the idea of the system made it 5. Idk if I count the system but whatever. World Background: 4: I would make this 4.5 but Idk how. It teaches you some stuff inside the world but generally you need to know what the world is to make everything make sense. Overall rating is 4.8(4.9if I could make the backround 4.5) I like this very much. All I have to say is...Stay Chill Author, Stay Sane. Also for some reason the MC kinda reminds me on Johnny Joestar from Jojo part 7. Main Character Insults to Luka be like

Not that i'm good at writing myself but some parts I really didn't like. Also legit like 30 reviews are like the author or a bot which caused this to have a high rating. I recommend you to find a real review for this.

I like pretty much but I do have some problems. 1. 20,000 multiplier for Gohan is still too much. 2. Unless Gohan was weaker in the Cell saga then he should be 1 trillion power level. That's slightly more then 40x SS3 Kid buu saga Goku and is 4x more then Goku Super Spirit Bomb in Kid Buu Saga. And is also 200 more then Super Perfect Cell in original DBZ. But still other then that It's pretty good. BTW SS1 + Kaioken x20 would normally destroy someone 's body if their alive lol

Called it the wrong thing. It is the best story and is actually called Bruh Zone

I really only got 1 single word for the exciting, amazing, godly writing that is... bruh story. And that word is this is so good that it is the definition of the word. Bruh.