Nabil048 - Profile

It’s a good chapter but you have to seriously think about giving an objective to Infinite because it is true to the original but it is not completely Infinite sonic games gives it an objective for example "It wishes to return in its original multiverse" otherwise it will become bland and difficult to evolve your character. I’m sorry if I’m giving you a lot of my opinions and I seem to be criticizing your work but I don’t see all the fuss on the spider-verse and I would love for you to keep going without having a script problem later thank you for your work.

I love the concept I just hope in the sequel he doesn't become a hero but stays true to the character you've developed over the course of the story, I hope infinite fights with the Spidermans of the whole multiverse would be nice.

You could do an OC so that we don’t get what you reserve for the love interest, you could even kick it that won’t have any impact with the hot characters. PS: Sorry for the spelling I am not anglophone and I use a translator. Otherwise continue like this you manage

i hope byrnndi World will join the dawn pirate otherwise great chapter

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