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there still a mess

I don't think that's a good considering the author idea of helping them is having his two other characters be spoon feed while main character has to work hard you gave edward a good physique and a good aptitude and glimpse of understanding mana and its done automatically

quite frankly the author needs to stop helping Edward you gave him a good physique and a good aptitude now your letting him get a glimpse of understanding mana this is gifting him too much for his low efforts

good too see zeus is back I waited a while for this

I kinda like these half finished chapters because it's better than waiting a long time for them to finish one chapter

I have question if shunlong learned spirit the techniques used to attack other cultivators souls wouldn't he be able to kill dao emperors.

so basically they will try anything to bound them like dao oath or marriage or servitude.

we were all on naughty list.

he has knowledge that rivals immortals.

a trade maybe?

what's he up to?

I think he will get a different earth flame this one fire he does not need it

my question is who is he going to use that talisman on? the winner of the earthen flame or the northern sovereign or someone else?

does this mean shunlong will get a earthen flame with his dao at some point.

glad to hear you're doing great

thank you

author note 1/5 what does that mean?

my condolences to the author

you forgot an imortal expert tried to look in shunlong memories while he was in that palace for the stone of space

I also kinda want to see shunlong unlock the ability to see multiple parallel timeline outcomes see which action he should take to get the best outcome.