robert_hines

robert_hines

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2021-05-23 Joined Global
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robert_hines
robert_hines
10 days ago
Posted

good concept good story only negative I've got is the character dialogue reads like a script instead of like an actual story as such it looses the wanted organic feel for the characters at least that's how I feel

robert_hines
robert_hines
11 days ago
Posted

love the concept love the story can wait for more chapters

robert_hines
robert_hines
16 days ago
Posted

the basis is okay but the dialogue it's nothing but moronic one liners. that sounds like a dumb poorly designed Ai was used.

robert_hines
robert_hines
27 days ago
Commented

+1

This book has been deleted.
robert_hines
robert_hines
1 months ago
Commented

i vote harem of duplikate, shrinking rae, universa, and annisa

robert_hines
robert_hines
1 months ago
Posted

love it can't wait for more keep up the good work man

robert_hines
robert_hines
1 months ago
Commented

love it though where is Tina and Timmy from comic wise or are they your own oc's

robert_hines
robert_hines
1 months ago
Commented

Like it so far can't wait for the eventual revenge and mother f×cking

robert_hines
robert_hines
2 months ago
Commented

don't let those j×ckasses get you down your stories good

robert_hines
robert_hines
2 months ago
Posted

can i please have the fics RAW name please.