Webnovel Author: Laevateins - Novel Collection

Also to add, his lines are supposed to be cringe, if that makes sense.

I understand where you are coming from, I don't know how much you've read but yes, the MC thinks he is cool and is overconfident, but soon learns over time that he isn't that strong. I implore you to read the rest of my book and if you still have this opinion let me know. Thanks for the review, but it would be nice to know what you liked as well seeing as you gave me 4 stars.

I think this book has a lot of potential. The concept is amazing, and I am really interested to see how the story progresses. The world background is really well done and the descriptive writing is also amazing at some points. A couple things that I personally didn't enjoy: -The dialogue style isn't the type I really enjoy reading, for me it ruins the flow when you write it like its a script, but that's just a personal issue. -The amount of info it dumps in the beginning can be a bit overwhelming, another personal thing. Don't let the small and nit-picky problems discourage from reading this novel. It has a lot of potential and I am going to continue reading as I am excited for its development. Keep going author you are doing great!