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Replied to Chupeta_de_baleia

I understand a single word of what you just said

Anyway, if you've read my works before, you'll notice that some readers complain that I have a habit of nerfing my Mc's all the time, so before we delve into the ff itself, I want to take my time to explain how the mc's abilities work.

Rinnegan in JJk

Rinnegan in JJk

Anime & Comics · David_555

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a lot of the reviews that have rated the book low have no valid reason to do so, one was literally, "oh he's a beta🤓", the only complaint they have is that mc is too weak... well that's the point of this fic, the mc was transmigrated inti the body of a civilian with average or below average chakra and was also a slacker, a guy said Takuma is a fool for waiting for basic training and sone were all about how it's the naruto world, there are endless ways to get strong, without even thinking, The strongest people in naruto are clanborn with monetary and informational backing or atleast genetic advantages(naruto,sasuke,itachi,madara,hashirama,etc)takuma has neither and the civilian born strong ninja are all people who were jonin trained and were hard workers or geniuses,compare that to takuma's situation, you can't jump into advance training without doing basics, it was specifically told takuma doesn't remember much of naruto, everybody is complaining that takuma is weak and pathetic, when that is exactly the point of the fic, people have gotten used to op mcs who wipe out everything in their way and have forgotten what good writing is, takuma loses often and that's what makes the times when he wins special, you feel for him as he grows, he does what he thinks is best with what he has, this isn't a story about growing from the weakest rapidly and being able to stand besides the strongest, it's about making do with being the weakest and doing your best to survive in a ruthless world, with that being said there are some problems, I know takuma is supposed to look super average as well but the way author-san describes him just looks super bland in my imagination, it would be more fun if it was described that takuma was wearing trinkets from his different wins and loses Or something, but he's just super plain,I love basic costumes, but they need to have something that makes them stand out from the crowd, I know that's the point and takuma is just another guy in the crowd, but man... also one of the tags is romance but the only romance I've seen till now is between takuma and his life, hopefully in later chapters there is something that justifies the tag, so far takuma has been Mr jack of all trades master of none, and now is being set up to specialize in genjutsu but there is not much unique about the way he uses his genjutsu either, just doctor super plain, I thought there was at least going to be some weed jutsu but nope. with all of that being said, this is a genuinely good read, you keep writing author, don't worry about those op mc crybabies, but hopefully you eventually give takuma some abilities that make him stand out.

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Replied to michael_white

aww, but weed jutsu...

Gouki said, "You should rub some mud to dull the smell before we go. I like whatever you're wearing, but it's too much."

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

Anime & Comics · FictionOnlyReader

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he realized this way too quick, most people don't even think that it's trauma holding them back

'Is the trauma from that C-rank raid still holding me back subconsciously?' he continued to panic in his head, but he had to dodge out of the way soon or he would be mauled by the approaching beast.

The Untouchable Hunter — (Solo Leveling x Jujutsu Kaisen Fanfiction)

The Untouchable Hunter — (Solo Leveling x Jujutsu Kaisen Fanfiction)

Anime & Comics · Lway20

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Replied to shin_rae_miu

1st-constructive criticism is a thing, instead of just crying about how the text based scene change was so bad and ruined your immersion you could've also said how to improve it, but you didn't, that's my point. 2nd-you clearly don't know about the tone about your comment, if that makes any sense, your comment about her wanting to be like chiyo seems aggressive and seemed like you were mad at rukia for not having known about things that she couldn't have possibly known. 3rd-your bit about how text based scene changes can ruin immersion is valid but i never saw it like you did, I always imagine fics about anime to be anime themselves, each individual chapter being an episode, with the text based scene change of this fic being a bumper with the anime's logo shown in between the episode for advertisements, I never told you to not read the scene change i told you to imagine it as part of the episode itself, now this is proper advice, which you don't know how to give. 4th-there's no need to ask for permission from the author to change the story, because you can't change the story, that is completely the author's decision, what I'm talking about are suggestions, instead of constructive criticism and a suggestion on how to change the scene change for the better you just kept crying about it. 5th- You said that I'm already looking for advice when the fic has barely began and the author is only laying the groundwork for the story in a negative way, that makes no sense, this is the where advice is the most important, in the groundwork itself, you can't expect the author to change something later in the story, in a way that would go against the previously set up characterisation and story without ruining the immersion, it's always better to lay a good base now than retcon it later.

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Replied to RagingVortex

thanks, I just wanted to confirm.

He had experienced death. Negative emotion.

Jujutsu Kaisen: Clash with curses

Jujutsu Kaisen: Clash with curses

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