Isn't it a hundred fold increase?
The immediate tenfold increase in my resources was staggering, transforming my strategic position overnight.
Fantasy · BS_Entertainment
Can we stop saying “step” “step”?
"step-" "step-" "step-"
Fantasy · DylanHusand
Looks like we lost out on a couple of chapters...the ones that were posted for 17 and 18 were obviously from a different book.
ch 19 Chapter19-The Desolate Mapleleaf Tribunal Branch
Fantasy · NewandMoe
I think the math is wrong here
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Urban · WriterFriend
Aren’t they the same name???
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Sci-fi · moone_heroall
Nvm…just saw the explanation
"So in 3 years. By the way, can I utilize the energies of my cores before maturation?" Jake nodded and then asked.
Fantasy · Enigmatic_Dream
Wouldn’t it be 6 years….as he is only 6 now???
"So in 3 years. By the way, can I utilize the energies of my cores before maturation?" Jake nodded and then asked.
Fantasy · Enigmatic_Dream
So…1 man, 2 women and one child…that makes 4 not 6
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Fantasy · Frost_Bite8
Should be "crates" not "craters". "Craters" are large holes in the ground
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Fantasy · Frost_Bite8
Since she is married, wouldn’t her virtue already be gone?
He was pleased with the events that occurred tonight and felt relieved that things turned out so well for everyone involved, especially Maria. Since he was able to save her before her virtue was ruined.
Eastern · Slow_down
The pronouns being mixed every chapter is a huge turn off
ch 0 2 The shine of the stars. (2)
Fantasy · ANGEL_Rodriguez
Is it a “she” or “he”?
Seeing that it was already late and his mother was leaving work soon, he decided to cut his way short so as not to worry. After 10 minutes the sky had darkened and she could only see thanks to the moonlight, she began to run without fear of stumbling due to the low light.
Fantasy · ANGEL_Rodriguez
Lot of repeated paragraphs and extra “”
ch 21 21.Industry Exchange Card
Urban · Daoist11vo4x
Didn’t Jennifer leave? So there should only be three there
All four of them sat in the chairs around the pit.
Fantasy · Luciferjl
Since when do people call friends by first and last name all the time? Makes the whole conversation feel off.
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Why did he even approach it from the front if it was detained???
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What happened to the formatting, big section is suddenly tiny
ch 19 Chapter 19: LAUGHTER IN THE CRIMSON CABARET!
Heir Of The Sun.
Fantasy · Rene_Tokiori