I've been keeping up with 'Simon Says' for a while now and I think its about time to I got to express how much improvement this story has foregone. First of all, the characters had started off with an interesting but a rather typically immature introduction. However, their development is evident and impressive, especially in the last ten chapters. I would also like to point out that the steady world building really gave the sense needed the plot alongside the beautiful descriptive ramblings (can you tell it's my weakness lol). The story is still in its early stages so it's definitely not easy to judge on the storyline as a whole and the pacing. The general impression is that it is slow but nevertheless engaging. Now, my favorite thing about this work has to be the humor, for some reason the two best friends and their everlasting bickering always makes my day. It worthy to mentions that both the dialouges and monologs are extremely entertaining and certainly tickle my funny bone. Lastly, I'd like to thank the author for investing their valuable time and efforts to write this wonderful story. Furthermore, I sincerely hope that this work gets all the love and acknowledgement it deserves. Keep it up! Your loyal reader, Ru.
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I've been keeping up with 'Simon Says' for a while now and I think its about time to I got to express how much improvement this story has foregone. First of all, the characters had started off with an interesting but a rather typically immature introduction. However, their development is evident and impressive, especially in the last ten chapters. I would also like to point out that the steady world building really gave the sense needed the plot alongside the beautiful descriptive ramblings (can you tell it's my weakness lol). The story is still in its early stages so it's definitely not easy to judge on the storyline as a whole and the pacing. The general impression is that it is slow but nevertheless engaging. Now, my favorite thing about this work has to be the humor, for some reason the two best friends and their everlasting bickering always makes my day. It worthy to mentions that both the dialouges and monologs are extremely entertaining and certainly tickle my funny bone. Lastly, I'd like to thank the author for investing their valuable time and efforts to write this wonderful story. Furthermore, I sincerely hope that this work gets all the love and acknowledgement it deserves. Keep it up! Your loyal reader, Ru.
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Fantasy · Littleguy