Thank goodness there is no ntr, there was a fanfic that I read until the end in a daze, because the fanfic was confusing, with scenes from the past with the present, so when I saw that Lyanna had died, I didn't really understand why it was a scene from the past, I was super confused and then there was a scene from the past that left between the lines the scene in which Lyanna met the prince, so I didn't want to believe it and I thought Lyanna had died in another way, only when they said that Lyanna died in childbirth that I had to accept that the mc had been betrayed by Lyanna.
I really don't like it when they change the personality of the original characters, Ruan Mei looks pathetic in this chapter, she is a cold and indifferent person to life, even indifferent to her own life, I don't think she would be scared like that
This is the fourth fanfic where I see an MC thinking he's superior to other MCs, is that a source of pride? This comparison is embarrassing.
I also think this is ridiculous, these MCs are so stupid, just yesterday I was reading a Chinese fanfic about traveling around the world, I've seen many MCs who look for harem, but this MC surpassed himself, he only thinks about women, he takes every female character that appears in front of him, he ignores all the male characters, I think the only positive point is that he didn't rape anyone, after all the female characters fell in love with him easily, he's pure script
I liked the fact that this fanfic admits that Rias is lazy, many fanfics say that she always trained, but saw no hope of beating Riser, but it doesn't make any sense, because in the anime in just a few days of training before the fight against Riser, they made great progress in strength, showing Rias' talent, as well as her companions, because Rias only chooses talented people, although they lost, but you have to admit that this was just a few days of training, Rias had several years to prepare for the fight against Riser
I don't care if it's AI or not, but if it is AI, tell the AI not to write too sentimentally, some parts are embarrassing
In fact, I think Hera is very selfish and a bully. She does nothing against Zeus, she only punishes mortals who get romantically involved with Zeus. Like, she's like those evil villains who are only strong against the weak, but in front of the strong, she does nothing. In fact, all the gods are selfish and cowardly, like when Poseidon forced Medusa, the one who was punished was Medusa and not Poseidon.
As long as he doesn't say future information, I don't think it's a problem for him to be mature. In the anime world, the most common thing is mature children, be it Itachi, Orochimaru, probably Tobirama. He didn't show his childhood, but I believe he was precocious. There are several other characters, the biggest example is Mebius from Honkai Impact. She was born knowing how to speak, but she's not a reincarnation, she's just super genius.
I thought it was just the beginning and then the MC would start to be respected, but I went to your other fanfic and saw a guy complaining that the characters are always comparing the MC to other guys, even though he has proven his worth with his modern ideas, he is still despised and considered inferior to others, I understand if it is just the beginning, but something tells me that even after Callum proves his worth, he will still be despised by someone, I am not a masochist and I am bothered by so much contempt, so I really can't continue reading a fanfic that makes me uncomfortable.
This book has been deleted.
I hope he kills Susano later
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