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hmmm, first of all, you've done a great job at writing, but you should add more details about characters such as there looks, costumes etc... also I noticed a thing, that by the start of story even he was weak yet confident that's why he screamed such nonsense like "I'm going to be strongest , blah blah" but whenever he saw himself in agony, he lost all his confidence like "I'm going to die... blah blah" I think only this was the weak, which can be fixed. overall, I enjoyed it. 😊
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hmmm, first of all, you've done a great job at writing, but you should add more details about characters such as there looks, costumes etc... also I noticed a thing, that by the start of story even he was weak yet confident that's why he screamed such nonsense like "I'm going to be strongest , blah blah" but whenever he saw himself in agony, he lost all his confidence like "I'm going to die... blah blah" I think only this was the weak, which can be fixed. overall, I enjoyed it. 😊
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Urban · Abhirav