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ch 0 7 The Varen Tribe

Death... and me

Fantasy · Suiyan

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Given the population, 1-month per exam, and say, 70-year life expectancy, there would be 11.7 Births/month. 24 is very high.

ch 0 7 The Varen Tribe

Death... and me

Fantasy · Suiyan

Daedaluxs

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for the next few days.

ch 1311 Temple of the Nightmare Spell

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Daedaluxs

8mth

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Excited to see the Battle Exchange fights

ch 317 Everything

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fantasy · HideousGrain

Daedaluxs

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truly

ch 1072 Brief Levity

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa u just had to didnt you

ch 1072 Brief Levity

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Daedaluxs

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:)

ch 250 Turn of Tide

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fantasy · HideousGrain

Daedaluxs

1yr

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Ariadne ain't coming bois

ch 898 Going for a Swim

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Daedaluxs

1yr

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waht

ch 886 Clean Up

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

Daedaluxs

1yr

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v nice

ch 883 Sortie

Its a good concept. Incredibly fast paced. The whole writing dynamic is very bland, robotic. Maybe it gets better, but finding someone to PR / edit this to add details and re-structure how things are said would do wonders. Many words simply don't fit, and break the flow. Show, don't tell. EX: Don't just say 'the mansion'. Describe it.