The author has a story that while it takes a few chapters to feel more concrete and stable has very creative ideas, and is able to describe actions well to help you feel the movement within the story. There is some bloat early on though, and if you push through that the writing does improve. Keep up the good work!
Fantasy · Suroj_Sapayev
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The author has a story that while it takes a few chapters to feel more concrete and stable has very creative ideas, and is able to describe actions well to help you feel the movement within the story. There is some bloat early on though, and if you push through that the writing does improve. Keep up the good work!
Earthling Soul
Fantasy · Suroj_Sapayev