I like the way how you've highlighted the inner turmoil of every character.. Kudos to you writer 馃槏 First Ruby and now Zayn 馃憤
Unaware of his condition, Moomal continued."But now, when I look back at the time we spent together, I think we were never meant to be together, we were two different people, with entirely different points of views of life. Yes I loved him a lot, but now I know that love is not enough to live a happy life. You have to give up many things for your partner if they are hurting them, you have to respect them, give them the same rights you are expecting from them to give you, and Huzaifa doesn't know anything about these important rules. he has to change himself, he has to think about others too to live a happy marital life, and in a way, I am helping him understand this thing because his selfishness will never let him be a good person, and leaving him will do a good not just to me but for him too." She didn't hide anything and told him her every thought and intention to make him understand her better.
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ah, our softie Moomal has a big heart 馃槉
ch 120 Chapter;120, What if she really loves you?
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Did you change the name of male protagonist?
ch 0 4 Chapter: 4, the new beginning
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Reality check: Dear Moomal, you know already about Ruby and she was in his life before your marriage. You're in no position to demand such thing. Although I don't like Huzaifa and his advances but you should change your vision to see some earthy realities (polygamy is allowed in our religion and culture, both). It's really understandable; person can't share his spouse/partner, other harsh realities can't be ignored just because of a minor problem.
"Has he left anything for me to think about? Amma, he's still with that woman!" The tears that had stopped for two moments had started again with this, which made Zarina Begum realized her mistake, and she shook her head lightly in affirmation.
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"You are suffocating him, lighten your hug a little. But If you want to hug someone tightly then you can use me for that." The last sentence was spoken in a small voice.
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Don't be cocky, Mr Huzaifa! 馃槀
"I know you love my abs." He couldn't stop himself from saying that, making Moomal return to the earth.
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Aham!
He then looked down at his chest. He was shirtless and was wearing only trunks. So basically, he was almost naked.
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umm I'm really confused, what's going on? 掳Sudden decision of marrying with Zayn wasn't necessary (from my perspective) 掳Moomal's demand doesn't make any sense because she knew already about Huzaifa's affair with Ruby before the marriage. She isolated herself away from this toxic environment and kept her son's identity secret even from her loved ones (these reactions are quite natural and understandable) but I'm dissatisfied with No sharing clause.
ch 107 Chapter:107, Court-Room
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"I thought I loved Ruby, but the truth is I was just attracted to her, she was only a challenge for me because she refused to be my girlfriend. I was stupid to think of my stubbornness and attraction as my love." Huzaifa spoke helplessly with a sad smile. His eyes were looking at Moomal's face.
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in the blink of an eye*
Is Zayn, with Moomal...?
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Why are you feeling like this, Huzaifa? weren't you the one who was in love with your favourite Ruby? what have changed in a blink of eye or your male ego doesn't want to share your property (Moomal) with anyone? I'm feeling bad for Ruby as well although she's clinging on him for her benefits but how can his feelings turned off for Ruby out of the sudden? Unbelievable!!! Cheers writer, you wrote it very well. There must be a genuine reason behind Huzaifa's wrongdoing. I trust you without any doubt. 鉂o笍
Is Zayn, with Moomal...?
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Karma is a bishhh Mr. Huzaifa!!!
Her words had burned him alive, he wanted to warn her of her limits. But remembering his mistakes, he remained silent and decided to ignore her completely.
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No problem. love you more 鉂o笍鉂o笍鉂o笍
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same here I just joined cos of you 鉂わ笍
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Well done Girl
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chauvinistic alert
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I'm learning how to use this app .Excuse my naivety/dumbness. I'm enjoying to read again from the beginning, you've converted this masterpiece into English language and it doesn't seem foreign to me. Perfectly well written 鉂わ笍
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馃槀
"Why...? Do you want me to share the bed with you!?" Huzaifa asked in astonishment.
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Hello, I'm here 馃槉
ch 0 1 Chapter 1 wedding night
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what a realistic ending!
ch 137 Chapter: 137 (Last) Their new beginning
I hate that I love You
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