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you won't find a better fantasy thriller novel the narration is good the story is captivating and can easily understood few things were messing up the story but the writer fixed those so overall a good read nice work author

I loved the concept of body swap, the story was interesting the narration was strong and captivating there were not any kind of grammatical errors in the first few chapters so all I can say good work author

the story was interesting, I loved the MC the fun was accurately poured into the story but there were grammatical and punctuation errors which I guess author has improved in further chapters Great work author

the author has done an amazing work on this one the story was convincing the characters were unique there were just few grammatical errors in the first chapter but as the story proceeded they were no where to be found good work author

I loved the way of things , the narration is smooth I loved the way writter has shown stressful life of a normal person in ch 1 there were few negligible punctuation errors but that did made any affect to the story Good work author

I loved the MC, the story was unique and mysterious, there were plenty of things that will keep the reader pushing for further chapters there was a negligible amount of error that was good author you're doing great

I've always been a fan of thrillers and this one hits the spot. I loved the storyline, the mc was deep,the writing was easily understandable. There were just few punctuation errors but they didn't affect the story much, So good work author

Your work was really wholesome the story and the idea was hooking I loved the way you explained every little thing and there were few punctuation errors just fix them and it's beyond perfect Good work author

there are punctuation errors too look into it too bro

I'll mark those in paragraph comments delete them after you read those

yeah , I kinda know, it's easier to point out others mistakes then ourselves but bro I was just trying to help you giving you a sugar coated review would be hurdle In your growth, and I'm okay with reviews pointing out my mistakes it'll help me improve I'm sorry if i looked rude

The relation between the king and queen was heartfelt, the story itself is flawless the story has many good aspects but few things will bother readers such as grammatical mistakes, punctuation errors may break the dialogues, few spelling mistakes too but if these things could be corrected the novel is gem itself

Beautiful!!! The story is so well written there weren't any possible punctuation or spell mistakes grammatical errors were low to none. The characters had the different and interesting mindset, the thoughts of the characters were deep The novel is a worth read Good work author

I loved the tone of the story, the magical world seemed promising the story was well-paced, the dialogues were well scripted the story had a flow in it easily understandable. And couldn't find any particular mistakes that may affect the story, at first I thought the MC would be like a shy innocent kind of girl but turns out no she isn't, tbh this may look like a fake praise but no, this is my honest review author you're doing awesome

The mixture of romance and action/mystery was sweet, I would love to see more of it, the characters are very well written I liked the character of venera very much and there weren't anything major to point out except punctuation and typography errors if these are improved you novel is wonderful

The story is amazing, and fresh the characters suit well with the story, the writing is good too, but there were errors like punctuation errors that were breaking the flow of sentences and some grammatical mistakes and minor typography mistakes if the author works on these he'll kill it.. Best of luck author you're doing great

I've reviewed already it's for pinning

one of the best political thriller and fantasy mix you can find on the whole webnovel app the writing is easy the story hooks from the start it's a must read

The idea of mute and translator was wholesome , they shared a great bond, the dialogues were well written the writing was easily understandable , there weren't any mistakes just some punctuation errors that could be solved and is not a big matter of concern the novel deserves a five stars

I loved the fantasy-magical theme of the novel the imagination of the writter is wide and Amazing the flow of story was good but there were few Petty mistakes breaking the flaw of the novel like - punctuation mistakes, typography, grammatical errors but if the author works on these things nothing can stop this novel from rocking on. a little cheer up dance for my author best of luck