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? which previous question. whether or not he's ever had his fill or whether or not he thought he could be forgiven by the sky god?

"Well, your hands are pretty nice. Long fingers, broad palm. No wonder I didn't notice when you stole my things. You haven't answered my previous question yet, have you?"

Kind-hearted Grim Reaper

Kind-hearted Grim Reaper

Fantasy · Tang Jia San Shao

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Author, iruppted is not a word.. maybe you meant invaded?

"She is not there" I mutter, my brain working on a dreadful image of what could have happened. "Elena irrupted in my room"

Her Return: A New Beginning

Her Return: A New Beginning

Urban · LunarKiss

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Author fix error . Squeezing her throat

"Did you just threaten my mate?" I grow menacingly and I feel her confidence slipping. "Do something against her, and I won't care who your father is, I will kill you" I threaten her quizzing her throat one last time before letting her go. She tries to regain the air she lost. I wait, there was no way I will leave my room with her still there.

Her Return: A New Beginning

Her Return: A New Beginning

Urban · LunarKiss

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why doesn't he wash the chicken feathers and then use them to make a softer bed by making a mattress cushion out of them instead of burning them. it was mentioned previously that his bed was hard

Afterward, he boiled water to pluck feathers, setting aflame the feathers he'd plucked, washing the chicken clean before placing it in a clay pot, filling it with water, bringing it to a boil over a high flame, and then simmering it over a low flame.

Longevity, starting from being a chicken raising servant

Longevity, starting from being a chicken raising servant

Eastern · East Sea Fish Head

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oops. or maybe add ...... as he was a young boy... it was a miss on my part

The man drank the water in her hand and shook his head to release himself from her hold, looking up at her. His face was covered in blood, his dirty hair hanging in front of his eyes. He looked as pitiful as could be. But when he lifted his eyelids, the gaze that peeked out from behind his dirty hair was the same as the young boy on the snow field years ago. Cold and proud, fierce and unyielding, like a blade reflecting the cold snow.

The Beta Dominates Alphas

The Beta Dominates Alphas

Fantasy · Treein

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change young boy to young girl

The man drank the water in her hand and shook his head to release himself from her hold, looking up at her. His face was covered in blood, his dirty hair hanging in front of his eyes. He looked as pitiful as could be. But when he lifted his eyelids, the gaze that peeked out from behind his dirty hair was the same as the young boy on the snow field years ago. Cold and proud, fierce and unyielding, like a blade reflecting the cold snow.

The Beta Dominates Alphas

The Beta Dominates Alphas

Fantasy · Treein

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I am not familiar with what the bonnet would be for her head and earlier chapter it was mentioned that he had a bonnet on his head when he woke up perhaps author could explain or add a meme picture of what this bonnet would be?

Idris went out of the car to buy a mini blanket and a bonnet at a nearby dry goods store. Then he put them on Sonia. After that, he drove till they arrived in the city, at the parking space of her residence, near her company.

I Wish I Could Love You

I Wish I Could Love You

Fantasy · Visionary_M

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it wasn't wine she was drinking it was whiskey

After speaking, she got up from his body, tilted her head to finish her glass of wine, walked to the large bed, opened the covers, and lay down on her side.

Mr President Spoils Me Too Much!

Mr President Spoils Me Too Much!

Urban · Mu Shengxiao

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wrong name she mentioned herself instead of her sister's name. author

"You..." Luo Hongying couldn't take it anymore. In her perception, how could Mo Shiche be so intimate with Luo Hongying? She found it unbelievable and unacceptable, "You two..."

Mr President Spoils Me Too Much!

Mr President Spoils Me Too Much!

Urban · Mu Shengxiao

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