Oh dang, I've been caught! I shall correct!
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It's fun to say. xD
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"Chins up, eyes straight ahead," he commands. "There is nothing they can throw at you that you won't get up from; not on my watch."
LGBT+ · SEP1A
For this sentence it will help to put a semicolon like so: "...the tallest around; even taller than the mansion." That will prevent it from being a run on sentence. I have trouble with this sometimes, too. For me it's honestly getting so caught up in the writing that you can miss the tiny things.
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Fantasy · waurpel
I love it! Already an awesome start
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