Despite reading the reviews, I was extremely disappointed with the experience. From a regular reader's point of view, the grammar may seem fine, but in my mind, it was "bad". It is rather disappointing when the focus is more on telling rather than showing. Readers may become lost when you, as the author switches between past and present tenses throughout the story. It would be better to focus on improvements to the story rather than just making more chapters.
Webnovel
Despite reading the reviews, I was extremely disappointed with the experience. From a regular reader's point of view, the grammar may seem fine, but in my mind, it was "bad". It is rather disappointing when the focus is more on telling rather than showing. Readers may become lost when you, as the author switches between past and present tenses throughout the story. It would be better to focus on improvements to the story rather than just making more chapters.
Transmigrated hacker becomes a Solitude painter
Fantasy · AnimeNyx