Danatos_2000

The Author is definitely a newbie but I hope he gets better as he grows. Read it if you are free and have nothing to do. I expect better things from the author. I think they should get an editor to sculpt the sentence in a better way. Also the pace is kinda broken so I hope that improves. Afaik this will be a multiple volumes/books novel.

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Danatos_2000

10mth

Commented

Good Chapter. I think the pace is a little fast. 35 Chapters in he is already a Grandmaster

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Danatos_2000

10mth

Commented

How much does the Book of Prophecy tell? Kai is talking as if he has read the novel?

ch 208 Stopping Kai [4]

I Will Kill The Author

Fantasy · Night_Crawler619

Danatos_2000

11mth

Posted

The overall idea of the story is really nice but the author is a newbie. Writing style and tempo is terrible. I'd really like if the author got an editor who could rewrite thebstory with better words

Reincarnated As Karna With System In Mahabharata

Fantasy · Suryaputra_Karna01

Danatos_2000

11mth

Posted

Bro the author is f k i n g b i t c h. He wrotes superb novels and then drops them. Or have poor updates. F k him........................pls author update the novel i am dying to read it pls pls pls

GAME DEVELOPER SYSTEM

Games · NunuXD

Danatos_2000

1yr

Replied to Untuk_Main

Once you read something like Lotm you will get higher standards. Lotm is epitome of novels. But still, the author has done a good job in writing this novel

I Will Kill The Author

Fantasy · Night_Crawler619

Danatos_2000

1yr

Posted

The MC is nice and observant but the plot feels a bit forced. Sometimes the MC acts mature but at other times he acts as a fool. Overall it is a nice novel for timepass reading. Author-kun I request you to stop making action scenes like that of a bollywood movie. In most fight scenes the MC first gets beaten and then suddenly he gets a "Crazy idea" and manages to defeat the monster. Please try to fix that. Try to make it look a bit natural. Also do you have a discord server? If so please post the link. You can also ask for readers view there to improve your writing.

A Warlock's Ascent

Fantasy · Indian_Sage1

Danatos_2000

1yr

Posted

This is one the best novels I am currently reading other that the Old Monsters (SS, SG, LoTM etc.) The writing quality is fairly good for a new novel. The Story development is going okay for a novel of this type. The characters can become more alive somehow by giving proper backstory instead of bits and pieces of past events. World Background is growing and I hope to see more of it in the future. Question Author-Nim Do you have a discord server? if Yes then please share like in Synopsis? If not I can help[img=recommend]. Also what is your discord ID. I am unable to send FR.

I Will Kill The Author

Fantasy · Night_Crawler619

Danatos_2000

1yr

Posted

I am at Chapter 327 and right now Ren only has 2 abilities:- Shadow Clone and a half Shadow door. Does he get more, does it get better? Please tell me

The First Order

Sci-fi · The Speaking Pork Trotter

Danatos_2000

1yr

Commented

why no updates?

ch 83 I Stole It

Blood Legacy: New World Of Doom

Fantasy · Arkinslize

Danatos_2000

1yr

Posted

Everything is perfect. Just like Oracle Paths but better. No info dumps or long system messages, Self made system so no annoying oracle limits, MC actually has a brain. And of course no Harem. Just love this Author. The suspense and dread of Crawlers is same as that of the Digestors from oracle paths. I just wish to know if this will somehow join the Oracle Paths story line.