Great story. It has very fleshed-out characters and backgrounds. I liked it very much, though I think that this story is a little bit slow. I think that it takes too long to reach the whole "Monster girl ranch" part. I also hope that our protagonist will use his knowledge from our world to make guns or something. Maybe include some pictures from Google that show what these monster girls look like.
Fantasy · Lasarus
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Great story. It has very fleshed-out characters and backgrounds. I liked it very much, though I think that this story is a little bit slow. I think that it takes too long to reach the whole "Monster girl ranch" part. I also hope that our protagonist will use his knowledge from our world to make guns or something. Maybe include some pictures from Google that show what these monster girls look like.
Monstergirl Rancher (Currently undergoing Rewrite)
Fantasy · Lasarus