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I hope he gets his next artifact.

Finally! I have been looking forward to this battle.

I am glad the pace is picking up. :)

I hope the GTS help.

Thanks!

There are your 20 gts.

Much better chapter as you only had one status entry and used it for another character's development. I think others will agree that story development is better than word count fill. even if it takes you longer, you can grow more readers.

While I like the story, you using the check Status as a word count filler is getting tiresome. We would rather you take a few days and have longer chapters than just status figures.

Feedback: My guess is that English is not your primary language and with that supposition, I try to ignore the various mistakes. l still have faith in your ideas and wish you the best with this novel!

Just curious, why don't they just collect the few remaing monster chest tokens and get first place?

Great chapter and I hunger for the next one!

1st. And it will be cool if he has a legion of Dark Elves!

Thanks for the chapter and overall work. I enjoy your story and appreciate the effort!

I wonder when we will see Ron's true identity. hmmmm

Hmm, pulled in by the tree or the Goddes?

Thanks for the chapter (although I'm greedy for more!) :)

Feel better!

Feel better!

So close!

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule