Complete a chapter properly….. You break a chapter in between and its awkward….. Story is good but this gets annoying
ch 20 Chapter 20 : Vanessa raised her hand)
Fantasy · Fanfiction_fan1
Also make sure to keep a clear line between the review and the chapters
Alright, that wraps up this Review Roundup, and thanks again to everyone who left a review! Make sure to leave a review if you want to be featured in the next chapter's Review Roundup. Follow and favorite if you genuinely enjoyed what you've read. Chapter five will come out relatively soon, no more time than a week, I promise. All the support has been phenomenal, you all are the best motivators and fans a writer could ever ask for. Rock on, and I'll see you next time!
Fantasy · Fanfiction_fan1
Make one chapter for the review ….. Do not extend it to multiple chapters….. There are readers who just wanna read the Fan fic not reviews and you are spoling the experience by putting everything together and extending the reviews
Alright, that wraps up this Review Roundup, and thanks again to everyone who left a review! Make sure to leave a review if you want to be featured in the next chapter's Review Roundup. Follow and favorite if you genuinely enjoyed what you've read. Chapter five will come out relatively soon, no more time than a week, I promise. All the support has been phenomenal, you all are the best motivators and fans a writer could ever ask for. Rock on, and I'll see you next time!
Fantasy · Fanfiction_fan1
Chapters are too short and review is longer….. Doesn’t feel like a chapter …. Just a small paragraph maybe.
ch 12 Chapter 12 : In terms of that chapter being sad
Fantasy · Fanfiction_fan1
Too many testaments 🤷♂️
"These two are not simple," the sect masters mused in silent agreement. Their speed was uncanny, defying the limits of Nascent Profound cultivation. If they had reached this stage, it was a testament to their exceptional abilities, and they were clearly more than simple peak Nascent cultivators.
Games · Nora_Danish
Is the system still there ??
Sean has never met someone like Hermione. In terms of grades, Hermione was slightly ahead of him. Sean was excellent only in the Transfiguration Class. Moreover, because of Sean, Hermione worked harder and harder.
Anime & Comics · Poka_Poka
😂😂
Next is my sister Lesley Rosier, a fifth year witch specializing in transformations and a feared genius in the field of enchantments, my mother favors her in every way possible.
Book&Literature · Anon20K
Thanks for addressing the issue
(5) Thank you for being understanding.
Anime & Comics · The_Greedy_Frog
Is everyone else able to see what's spoken by system?
<<Quest One: Figure out the names of the boys!>>
Anime & Comics · The_Greedy_Frog
I like this book the more I read it 💯
Is there gonna be any romance? Even a short one is fine 🤷♂️
"Send over a patronus if you need anything," I said with a raised voice. Susan nodded and took off. I saw Hermione's retreating back stop for a moment before giving me a thumbs up without turning back.
Book&Literature · Demigod_Patronus
What happened at the sorting ceremony ??
ch 0 6 Wands Ready
Movies · Crazy_Penguin
Again hardly 2-3 paragraphs of the story and more bs
ch 27 Chapter 27 : Sacred Gears )
DxD : High School
Fantasy · Fanfiction_fan1