Honestly, reading this as the author, it's pretty bad, too fast paced, not much explanation, then again, this is a novel a plan on making up as i write. I'd always wanted to read a parallel world story, where the world is pretty much the same but has stuff like talking cats, flying fish. That kind of stuff, so i thought i'd write it, no idea how to write though so if anyone reads this and has any ideas, please tell me.
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · pilgrimm
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Honestly, reading this as the author, it's pretty bad, too fast paced, not much explanation, then again, this is a novel a plan on making up as i write. I'd always wanted to read a parallel world story, where the world is pretty much the same but has stuff like talking cats, flying fish. That kind of stuff, so i thought i'd write it, no idea how to write though so if anyone reads this and has any ideas, please tell me.
ch 0 1 Prologue
Parallel World Salvation
Fantasy · pilgrimm