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I am glad she went to see her family. I am enjoying the story, and like that the story is progressing without getting too caught up in useless details. On a more editorial note, I noticed that you aren’t consistent with capitalization, especially with names. Being a bit of a grammar fanatic, it makes the story harder to read with those errors.

I wish the chapters were a bit longer

This is so heart breaking