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They immediately had to pull up, as a large tentacle came from the water to swat at them. The sea itself seemed to come alive as all manner of monsters from the surrounding waters took to shore, called by the sweet scent of Fury.
Fantasy · Srinlife
schools of fish
Gradually, more and more fish appeared in flocks instead of two or three and swam together toward the stern. Looking far ahead, Ashes was shocked at this phenomenon—as more and more fish joined this flock, there was a dark red, thick line appearing in the sea. Apparently, the sailing ship marched on by following this red line, and she could hear the sound of striking from time to time as those fish swam through the bottom of the ship.
Fantasy · Er Mu
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ch 21 Chapter 21 : At Year 12 I Will Kill Him
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
better translater or grammar cmon now use Grammarly
Waldo's hand stopped trembling, and suddenly he was not fear anymore. Seeing Arthur's eyes made him felt what Arthur said would be true. The persistence when he swung his sword, by that persistence, Waldo knew Arthur could be strong, much stronger than he could imagine.
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
My name is Mr. Griffith....
"Are you sure?" Ferlin found it quite funny when Irene talked about those scripts so seriously and asked, "Do you think it's even better than Mr. Kajen Fels' widely recognized works, 'For Rose' and 'A Prince Searching for Love'? They don't only hit in the king's city, but also attract troupes from the other kingdoms to watch and learn. I could hear Mr. Griffith's name all the time even in the stronghold."
Fantasy · Er Mu
"Roughly the size of three football fields."
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Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
intimidate is the wrong word
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Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Switching between points of veiw rather than having a fixed with, isn't isn't problem but transition should be worked on
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Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Paragraph summarize and organization needs to be worked on
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Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
Major grammar flaws bu it's stylized nicely I expect to see better in the coming chapters
The boy is confused and full of joy at the same time. He did not clearly understand what his mother said, but he was happy to hear that from her.
Fantasy · Hile_Lawrence
that's an amazing aruguement I'm glad you can hold to your claims
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Games · Alekzi
can you like use spellchecker bro
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Fantasy · Killix_Kreed
bruh
ch 0 9 Chapter 9: Counting the Rewards
Games · Pumpkin Mine
a long knife is around 7 to 9 inches but we don't need a accurate accessmwnt of how deep the knife went
One after another, the knife was plunged three inches deep into the bear's body.
Games · Pumpkin Mine
ummm 99.99 percent is to high the game would be to hard and I doubt a scrub would enjoy the game like she is
As the only super-game in the real world whose realism approached 99.99%, the number of players in the game was naturally brimming. The game had just launched, but there were already a large number of players flooding in.
Games · Pumpkin Mine
shotty start no back ground and the fact that he instantly knew what happened was a gross way about it
When he woke up, he realized that he had transmigrated.
Games · Pumpkin Mine
when new chapter
ch 164 Chapter 8.19 - The Scent of Fury
Boundless: A Tale of Infinite Possibility
Fantasy · Srinlife