HI_IM_TUESDAY

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The author is in the chapter editing process. No need to rush or complain.

Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon

HI_IM_TUESDAY

1mth

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Short update: 1. Story 4/5 2. Development 4/5 The rest are still 5/5 I'm looking forward to writing a second review at 200 chapters. Don't overwork yourself, good luck. Proud of your work.

Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon

HI_IM_TUESDAY

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Forgot to say, I believe I left a review on the ratings page already and that opinion still holds if it hasn't increased.

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Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon

HI_IM_TUESDAY

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🤣 Dude im not angry, im worried. I know the editing is probably a lot of work, especially if you are trying to get it done at a certain time. Just pace yourself, you're doin great. 🙂👍

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Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon

HI_IM_TUESDAY

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Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon

HI_IM_TUESDAY

2mth

Commented

I hope he helps them.

As for what Leo wanted to do with a few crystal hearts, Malachi had an idea in mind.

Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon

HI_IM_TUESDAY

2mth

Commented

Uggggh...🙄

Malachi was a little surprised at his question. To be more accurate, if anyone were to use a crystal heart among them, that person would be David because regardless of the ones they gathered from skeleton monsters or the ones David, and Leo gathered before, David had a bigger share, while Malachi knew he almost contributed nothing.

Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse

Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon

HI_IM_TUESDAY

2mth

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4.8/5 My bad

An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

HI_IM_TUESDAY

2mth

Posted

Hey, I like your story so I will be doing an occasional rate and review as I continue reading. Take my input or don't, I don't care. ____________________________________________ 1. Quality is good enough for me to fear it dropping some day. I like how everything is scripted from interactions to the overall story telling. (5/5) 2. The story has an amazing pace and watching the progression and changes taking place in the world is entertaining. I like how you describe even the bad things. (5/5) 3. I think the characters are amazingly crafted. The interactions are entertaining and watching the Mc have struggles outside of strength is perfection. (4/5) 4. "30 chapters a week". (5/5) 5. I like how there is always something new about the world the characters inhabit. Maybe someday they will show other places? (5/5) Overall: (4.5/5) Final Note: Team Trisha 👌😶

An Extra’s POV

Fantasy · Magecrafter

HI_IM_TUESDAY

2mth

Posted

Hey, I like your story so I'll be doing an occasional rating and review as I continue reading. Take my input as you see fit or don't I don't care. _____________________________________________ 1. The story feels repetitive, as if youre just trying to add more words for no reason. (3/5) 2. The story is developing, but you tend to drone unnecessarily on unimportant details. (3/5) 3. I love how each character is represented + the insight to the individual emotions and ideals is entertaining. (5/5) 4. Updates seem steady enough and the story is still consistent. (5/5) 5. Beautifully crafted world + enjoyable descriptions. (5/5) Overall: (4.2/5) Great Story Final Note: I intend to keep reading and look forward to seeing how this story goes.