Pretty good flow of the book and I like the way you introduce plenty of new characters in the book. Looking forward to many more chapters too.
Sci-fi · Shannon_DeNure
The story keeps you in suspense enough to read further and the story flows real good too! Very interesting!
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Pretty good flow of the book and I like the way you introduce plenty of new characters in the book. Looking forward to many more chapters too.
Rise Of Immortal Dawn
Sci-fi · Shannon_DeNure