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So Alex needs her to fail being an obedient concubine to not make her a wife. This is a great opportunity to issue her a warning. 2 more warnings and the deal is canceled. Later on just create situations where those warnings are inevitable and the situation is resolved!
ch 960 Princess Camelia Home
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
Hahaha, bro does damage control😂
"Then… my lord, please allow my father to accompany her to Zanzan. Perhaps he will even get better there." as his eyes then shone with a bright new light, "Yes! I have heard the treatment you have there are leagues ahead of us! Please! Take him there!"
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
So Perseus has burnt his home, and almost killed his women and Alex will simply leave him be?!
ch 899 Revelry At the Capital (Part-2)
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
These pendulum swings in writing is sorta strange. As though someone has menstruation cycles😂😂😂 I see absolutely no sense in making the previous battle any relative if everything would end this easy…
From that Alexander knew that Perseus was running low on gold to pay his mercenaries which consisted of a majority of his army, so if those men got frustrated with a lack of results and left, Perseus would be like a naked man all alone outside in the dead of winter.
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
How on earth did the soldiers then hear the dying curses of that noble in the center of the army?! Right?! So it means all this battle was based on bull**it excuse to not let the center fall quickly and have Alex secure an easy win…😩
And even then, only the soldiers in the outermost fringes of the formation and the closest to Hemicus were able to detect him, for the battlefield was a very noisy place, and the helmets the soldiers wore restricted all peripheral vision.Â
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
I have already dropped the novel once after that idiotic river crossing of Menes. I would’ve dropped it once more right now, if there was anything to read! Sadly there are just 3-4 readable kingdombulding novels to choose from so alas…
ch 872 A Self Reflective Analysis
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
Same here. I have no idea why the author destroys his own novel with such forced and unnatural scenarios. And most important is that all that MC has done yields 0 returns: better quality iron weapons - nothing changes, chainmail - nothing changes, revolutionary cavalery - nothing changes, modernized system of command - nothing changes, regular army troops with constant training - nothing changes…
ch 870 Perseus Vs Alexander (Part-5)
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
What victories?! He almost died countless times without any reason. A sane man would be extremely cautious afterwards. This is plain nerfing the MC for the tenth time already.
It was slightly hubristic on his part but after his recent string of victories, who could have blamed Alexander for riding a bit high and feeling confident?Â
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
I hate this the most about this novel. Alex has absolute advantage in almost every battle and yet he wins only because of some miracle… there are countless things his troops are better at and for this author that’s still not enough! It always gives me masochist vibes if I see people enjoy such writing style…
ch 867 Perseus Vs Alexander (Part-2)
Herald of Steel
War · FerriticMatrix
PLEASE don’t make MC try to change her and make waifu material!!! He better find himself a normal girlfriend later on rather than suffer with this awkward fish!
All of that added up together, then multiplied by her general weirdness, was ultimately responsible for creating the false image of a mysterious, unapproachable ice princess.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree
Why if he does cardio first thing in the morning? When I go to the gym early I don’t shower as well, since it’s useless cuz you get sweaty in 5 mins
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Well, cow’s a grown up after 2 years technically…
This book has been deleted.
If you blame everything on fiction as you say, then the novel is obviously trash. And that is literally the reason I dropped it long ago
Wearing a soft cotton dress, I stared at the ceiling and thought deeply.
SPELLCRAFT: Reincarnation Of A Magic Scholar
Fantasy · Magecrafter
Bad writing here. It’s the first scene in the novel that is boring to read!
He adjusted his footing and grabbed the sword tightly with both of his hands and challenged loudly..
Hero of Darkness
Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
Bruh, why do everybody go with the misconception of archers=agility?! Archers were the most physically developed warriors throughout the history! It’s extremely hard to keep pulling the string for hours on end during a battle! On the contrary, a soldier type of warrior has to be sturdy and agile to hide behind a shield and use a spear/sword while cowering.
Among the bodyguards, there were 2 women and 3 men. One of the women having a metal wand in her hand who was conjuring spells and creating barriers to help her allies. The other woman being an Archer who looked very skilled and fast at shooting her arrows every time an enemy tried to make a move.
Hero of Darkness
Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
Man, this is simply copy-pasting. At least make them independent beings for some original story-development. For example: he has to leave this snake in the forest cuz he can’t take it to any settlement. But later on he absorbs/combines the snake with a mimic so it can take human form.
[This is an exclusive ability for all the Subordinates created by the host which allows them to merge with Host's shadow and be with him no matter where the host goes.
Hero of Darkness
Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
😂😂😂
All of that added up together, then multiplied by her general weirdness, was ultimately responsible for creating the false image of a mysterious, unapproachable ice princess.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree