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This is without a doubt one of the best stories I've read set in the world of Game of Thrones, the development of the story is on a very good path, the update stability, and the character development, that last one is what I like the most. We went from seeing the Mc of a man with a 21st century mentality, With an 'honorable' ethic of said date, But thanks to the events we see that his mentality changes, he grows as a person, he adapts too quickly to the new world because he knows that if he doesn't he can die. Creating massacres and killing people in order to fulfill their objectives, without a doubt a great story so far. I just hope you keep up the good work, while there is room for improvement in grammar, it doesn't take away from the fact that the author knows what he's doing so far.

En sí la historia es algo poco común, la gramática hay que mejorarla un poco, el mc está sin desarrollo, a parte de saber que es alguien decidido a hacer lo que quiere sin importar asesinar al que se le enfrente, la historia no muestra algo más sobre su personalidad, sin embargo la historia es muy buena para pasar el tiempo.