Kinda unexpected
This was the night my father raped and abused me. This was the night I lost my voice. Everything went black after that.
LGBT+ · BeeInAPan
Kinda wondered, who's liver Zuhaib pull?
"How did I get here? All I remember is that I saw Zafar tied up to a chair and I couldn't move after Zuhaib pulled some liver and a light just came out of nowhere and now I m here.Maybe I'm in a dream,well if it's a dream I just wanna wake up already my day was just so tough i want sort out things with Faisal and Zuha- Oh wait! I know that I am dreaming so does that mean I am lucid dreaming? Huh? I can't really seem to do anything. I can't even move on my on. Maybe I am not lucid dream- wait what?"
Action · Zeton
For the POV, you can make it like this whole chapter is from James and the next chapter is from the other perspective. So you don't need to mention who is the POV currently. Each character has a characteristic, use that to your advantage for the reader to be aware that if you mentioned that certain characteristic they will know who it was. I can't comment on how you should do to the story pace because it's just my preference, so it's better to think about it yourself [img=recommend]
Justice And Desire
Urban · Jenival_Enyia