"Say hello to Titania for me." She said as she smiled, moments later disintegrating. Becoming a pile of ash.
Fantasy · Laevateins
Hi, there I see what you mean and I believe my vision of the characters were not executed the way I wanted them to be which is why I have taken a small break to plan it all out properly. In the coming day or two the chapters will have changed significantly to fit the style of the first chapter. I want this to be a story where the main character is ruthless due to his end/beginning. Although harsh your review has helped me see my errors so thank you.
Fantasy · Fh_Hzl
Ive enjoyed reading this from the start and now i can give it a proper review and let the author know that they are Doing a favulous job at creating a world where i can go and let my imagination free. i love oliver and his character, i cant wait to see what you do in the future. Good luck
I Have never looked forward to reading something this much. I saw the basic idea go from just chatter and i could not be more proud to be reading this officially. I cannot wait for future updates. GOOD LUCK you have my full support man
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"Say hello to Titania for me." She said as she smiled, moments later disintegrating. Becoming a pile of ash.
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Fantasy · Laevateins