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I hear you, this season has been unforgiving for me too. If it’s not a cold one week, it’s something else the next week.

I’m not frustrated, in fact I find it incredible that you managed to get the story this far. In all honesty I’m glad, the story was getting stale and I honestly expected burnout or a hiatus much sooner. By all means take as much time as you want, I’m grateful with what you’ve given.

The quality of a story takes a nose dive when death becomes irrelevant. The Valkyries thing was already pushing it, this would just further destroy this story. The power fantasy is already ridiculous enough, but making death irrelevant will just make this story boring.

Ok, I gotta ask, why is it you favor Natasha so much.

Gonna be honest here, I don't think you've put much thought into this multiverse organization storyline. Things have been nothing but good for peter that it's becoming stale, and this multiverse arc feels like it's going to be handled extremely poorly. Multiverse is a Pandora's box that no amount of power will ever equate to a positive outcome. There's an infinite number of factors that Peter isn't accounting for that seem like will be swept under the rug just so this power fantasy can continue. Look at any media that deals with Multiverse hoping individuals and you'll see first hand that no amount of preparation will ever be enough. Peter seems to immature with the way he's handling everything that it should have blown up in his face ages ago. I like this story don't get me wrong, it's just now it's getting repetitive and this multiverse arc is going to be much the same.

This is what I love of Creative one Piece Fan fics. When authors focus on just how busted a power is. I can’t stand power stacking, it’s lazy and absolutely annoying. However taking one power and finding a thousand uses for it, is the stuff I can’t get enough of. Seeing how busted the Smoke fruit can be, even when it’s categorized as a god fruit is still enjoyable.

I actually like Stan Edgar, really hope Spider Man doesn’t kill him. Cause seriously, this solving everyone’s problems thing is losing its initial luster. What Peter should be doing guiding key figures, not instantly solve everything and then dip. Terrible consequences arise from that, and the initial help provide amounts to nothing in the end when it’s washed away in less competent people’s hands.

4 years is a long time. While I’m all for LanCaster, Ruby had 4 years after Jaune had died to move on. Maybe it’s my pessimism, but I think Ruby might have found somebody else during the last 4 years of her life, maybe even had a kid. It’d be an interesting plot point if that was the case, as everyone who lived those 4 years know about Ruby eventually moving on. Maybe even Ruby finds it difficult to get back together with Jaune. She’d still love him, but 4 years is still a long time. It would be interesting to see them get through that hurdle, especially if the person she found after Jaunes death is long gone. There’s just so much that can be done but this is only a suggestion.

Ok May needs to take that back, Santa is real!

I think I'd like to see your take with Shanks, but rather than start at Rogers execution, I think you should have him start when Oden joins the crew. Have the MC build a personality while sailing with Roger. More time is always appreciated.

I honestly hope Peter takes Harry, his parents and the marauders to his universe. At least to train Harry in his magic.

I think Peter should turn this world into a multiversal hub. His very own world in which he can train the citizens to travel the multiverse. With the population drastically lowered, it’s the perfect world for Peter to Claim as his own. Also he should set up a Tv with Infinite channels like from Rick and Morty.

My vote for the Honeymoon. If you’re gonna touch on Mechs, I say go to Evangelion, that world is in desperate need of saving, and Shinji needs a proper role model than the idiots that think putting insurmountable pressure on a teen is a smart idea. For a proper Honeymoon to an anime world, my vote is the Fate Stay Night. Their Magic System would be a great benefit to Spider-Man, as their system is built on finesse as opposed to over powered. Their limited magic forced them to refine their mastery over magecraft, and pushed them to use very little to accomplish a lot. Peter can learn a lot of refinement for his magic and powers.

I truly enjoy your brand of storytelling. While it’s not the best I’ve read, it’s honestly rather soothing to read. There’s a sense of tranquility to it that most stories fail to grasp. I’m looking forward to more updates and hope that this story isn’t one you plan to abandon. It’s honestly a gem in my opinion.

Is it wrong that during the next spider verse event that Web of Dragons Peter appears and both challenges and defeats Ultimate Peter for title of strongest Spider-Man. It’d be even funnier if WoD Peter says he’s trained with the Sayians and this causes Ultimate Peter to start freaking out.

Missed opportunity for a pulp fiction reference.

This is interesting, everyone else has a couple of years ahead of Jaune now. This could be a well explored plot point, yet once again Pyrrha is still the first death.

Not gonna lie, I always believed Zoro is Vice captain of the straw hats, mostly because when it comes down to it he’s the one who puts his foot down when Luffy doesn’t know his place. However this story has a competent Luffy, so I don’t Think Zoro would be good Vice captain Material. This Luffy doesn’t need someone to say the tough things that need to be said. What this Luffy needs for a Vice Captain is someone with the ambition to stand next to him and command the Crew. Zoro could do it, but this Zoro strikes me as the kind that wants to focus on his ambition to be the greatest Swordsman and protect the Crew, not lead it. Which is why I’m hoping Law joins the Crew and becomes Vice Captain, he’s everything Luffy needs in a second in command, and as an already established Captain he has the experience. But this is my opinion and I’m fine either way, I’m still enjoying the story.

You focus on yourself and settling your peace of mind, however long it may take. Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise, and take as long as you need. Whether you choose to continue or abandon this story, is nobody else’s business but your own. Get better soon, I’ll pray for you.

I need to ask your opinion on the new One Piece Red movie on Uta being Shanks daughter. I ask because her conception should be coinciding sometime after this War with Kaido.