Okkai, so till now the story is good. It can be a more interesting if you add more twist and turns. It will surely boom like BOOOOOOM 馃挜 [img=update]
Fantasy 路 The_Banana_Boy
The story till now is good and the concept is simple and new. I will be waiting for more updates and good story. keep it up [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Realistic 路 INSAA
I am a newbie , so don't know much about novels and stuffs. But I liked the story and hope to support it.I wish you good luck and Update soon.[img=recommend]
Fantasy 路 UNCANNY
Its great man, better than mine at least 馃槄.i wrote a book superstar in than deleted it as it was bad and not enough words 馃槅馃槅馃槅.[img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
Urban 路 Initiator
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Fantasy 路 Ray_Trev
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
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Okkai, so till now the story is good. It can be a more interesting if you add more twist and turns. It will surely boom like BOOOOOOM 馃挜 [img=update]
REONEX : The Black Dragon
Fantasy 路 The_Banana_Boy