Trying my best to be critical here, the faults are much more hidden and the discrepancies are hard to notice. The main character's personality is not clearly shown, though that can be attributed to the fact that he's a kid, it can still be improved. Good luck author-san~
Fantasy · Apprentice4
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Trying my best to be critical here, the faults are much more hidden and the discrepancies are hard to notice. The main character's personality is not clearly shown, though that can be attributed to the fact that he's a kid, it can still be improved. Good luck author-san~
Timeless Celestial's Odyssey
Fantasy · Apprentice4