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Years ago?

That day, some years ago, while the princess stood in the center of the throne room... with everybody's eyes on her, Lily had felt like pushing the princess off her high horse.

CONTRACT WITH THE DEMON PRINCE

CONTRACT WITH THE DEMON PRINCE

Fantasy · Oma_Uche

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Abdicate, not usurp. Abdicate means to gIve up the throne and give it to the next in line for the throne. Usurp means to take the throne from the ruler.

"Every king that rules over Oryn has their period of reign already determined, Samantha. They can never occupy the throne once their reign is over. Nobody knows how long one will be able to rule when they initially take over the throne. But once their time to usurp is near, they start getting indications about it, be it in the form of dreams or from other sources."

Trapped for Eternity

Trapped for Eternity

Fantasy · prada_murthy

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Thank you for using the right title

"Your Highness, we have nothing to complain about. Thank you for taking care of us." Saorsa bowed at him and Ragnar realized that she was indicating something else which he could not understand.

Trapped for Eternity

Trapped for Eternity

Fantasy · prada_murthy

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He’s a KING not a lord

"My Lord?" He questioned, prepared to follow the young King's orders.

Trapped for Eternity

Trapped for Eternity

Fantasy · prada_murthy

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Ive just got to say it... he’s a KING, not a lord. why is everyone calling him lord? They should refer to hIm as your/his highness or your magesty. Sorry, just driving me crazy.

"That's good to hear, dear. It will be our pleasure to serve the Lord." Susanne chirped, and Alastair nodded at them, accepting their hospitality. Their joy was sincere, and Alastair was more than happy to spend the night in their mansion, and it was not the first time he had done so. Though the young King was uncomfortable spending the night elsewhere, at somebody else's mansion, he had to do so for Samantha. 

Trapped for Eternity

Trapped for Eternity

Fantasy · prada_murthy

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What do you mean by upsode doWn? How do you look at someone frOm upsode dOwn? It makes no sense.

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Same. why is he always staring at her from upsode down Makes no sense

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Raffinate is not the correct word to use here

The sleeves were puffed and it had a bell-shaped skirt that extended from the line of the side to its lower part, giving the whole look a raffinate touch.

Love Agreement With The King

Love Agreement With The King

Fantasy · Elle_Lynn

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Dear author , your story is great, but please check your grammer and word choices before publishing

His surprisement made her took a honest laugh, but he shook his head, almost missing a step but quickly getting back on track.

Love Agreement With The King

Love Agreement With The King

Fantasy · Elle_Lynn

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What dId his father offer him? I feel like this has been kept secret For way too long

Alex started narrating to him what he and his father talked about regarding his situation in the palace. His father offered him a semi-solution to his problem, although it was not a guarantee get out of jail free pass card.

The Royal Contract

The Royal Contract

Urban · bishop1275

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Doesnt he already have Her number

"Do you have Kimmy's mobile number?" Cain asked directly.

Kiss Me Not

Kiss Me Not

Urban · Eustoma_Reyna

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Now Im starting to get confused..

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The Duke's Passion

The Duke's Passion

Fantasy · alienfrommars

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Pure oxygen is absolutely extremely flammable. Flames need oxygen to burn and grow. Thats why when you cover a fire with sand or a fire blanket, or put the lid on a candle, the flames die. you are effectively cutting off their oxygen source.

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Hes definitely not going to leave her alone

The High Priestess now wants to talk with me alone. She turns to my Duke and waits for him to excuse himself, but it doesn't happen.

Crazy Duke and Fallen Queen

Crazy Duke and Fallen Queen

History · xiaohai_23

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