Badges 9
Moments 16
Seen! But it's may(verb) , not May (name)
“Ah geez I almost forgot they may have already started searching for me and they can’t find me with my face and eyes like this”
Dark Matter (Unknown Origins Book One)
Fantasy · Jefferson Nwokoro
Please don't. It's really helping me a lot. You wouldn't believe just how many times I've proof read this
“Since it’s Friday, the begging of the weekend, we would allow you all to feel comfortable and enjoy the entire day doing what you wish, explore the woods and so much more supervised as usual “ he continued which aroused another thunderous applause.
Dark Matter (Unknown Origins Book One)
Fantasy · Jefferson Nwokoro
😂 What would you have done?
“ Sure I can” she replied “thanks Liam,” she said wiping off her tears. She should've hugged him standing, but she was relatively shorter than him, so they hugged knelt down instead. Accomplishing his mission, he left, not noticing the slightly opened door of Stacey's room.
Dark Matter (Unknown Origins Book One)
Fantasy · Jefferson Nwokoro
Yeah! Forgive me
“ Any idea on wheat we're looking at?” May asked in amazement.
Dark Matter (Unknown Origins Book One)
Fantasy · Jefferson Nwokoro
It will have 5 more books in fact
it must've been like: "what the heck?
Swinging it wrongly, he saw himself somersaulting like a rocking chair with no arm. He was just like a clueless SpongeBob, moving left and right in weird angles that even left the predator confused.
Ocean Master
Fantasy · GREAT
😂😂😂🤩
He tried all the swimming techniques that he knew as a human but nothing seemed to be working. He tried butterfly style, breaststroke, backstroke, front crawl, and even the backside dance but none of them worked.
Ocean Master
Fantasy · GREAT
😂😂😂🤩🤩
He tried all the swimming techniques that he knew as a human but nothing seemed to be working. He tried butterfly style, breaststroke, backstroke, front crawl, and even the backside dance but none of them worked.
Ocean Master
Fantasy · GREAT
Dude, make known who is narrating, it became a bit confusing
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Avian's Advent
Fantasy · Frostoon
Hi! I've seen your comments on my book, and I appreciate them a lot . Please be assured that I'm always working to improve the book, but perhaps you shouldn't focus too much on the mistakes so it doesn't dampen your experience. I assure you that it will only get better. If your tired of the main plot, there are sub-stories you could jump to without fear of spoiling the book. Thanks alot❤️
Dark Matter (Unknown Origins Book One)
Fantasy · Jefferson Nwokoro