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O que aconteceu? Não consigo usar o Google tradutor agora...

O pai dele é chefe cientista do exército global e mora na favela? Ele gastou todo o dinheiro, mas a mãe dele morreu quando a nave caiu na favela, só existe favela ou os cientistas não recebem muito dinheiro?

No. He was not a Magus.

If it were me, I would think the following. Probably the variant met someone at this restaurant and then he killed that person. To erase his tracks, he killed everyone else who saw his face. So we think it's just a massacre, but in fact he only had one person in mind. We should do background checks on all dead bodies to see if we can find anyone who was threatened, had involvement in crimes or other motives.

This work is full of holes. How does he know he's S rank? and the S rank is pretty weak, they can die with bullets and are only able to destroy a bar? If it was in other stories, it would be considered Rank C or B at most. I would only call rank S if an entire city disappeared...

Bodies are usually cremated. It would be more interesting if Dr. Min diverted him from the crematorium to the rubbish dump.

MOREEE

I liked it, the story is slow, but I'm enjoying it. Just missing details and information to help with the imagination. If he enters a place, tell him what it is like, if he meets a person, tell him what he looks like. For example, if he enters a cave, don't just say he entered a cave. Give details! Was the cave dark? did you have moisture? Was it spacious? etc etc

good, but lacked details of how the characters look like!

Isso só aumenta o poder físico ou aumenta a capacidade mágica também?

Emery could blow up the engine and teleport out easily

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I don't think the clone idea is bad. As long as he just controls them, like an extension of the mind. So, even though he's a clone, he's still him. But if the clone gains its own thoughts then it gets a little boring...

Won't you have the chapters today?

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