I don't think the author is forcing it, he has a very valid point and you notice that during the other chapters they have an attraction for each other so the fact that he is asking her to be his girlfriend now doesn't seem bad or very forced, on the contrary it isn't forced but I think it's the question of what is the right time to ask for a date the issue here is that sometimes it's never the right time you pray for a miracle and then you jump in he saw this as the right time and it was for a chance that this problem and also danger appeared so if you see it from my point of view then it wasn't forced then sir. Author, keep it up, the chapter is well written.
ch 206 Unforseen
Movies · NewComer714
I don't think the author is forcing it, he has a very valid point and you notice that during the other chapters they have an attraction for each other so the fact that he is asking her to be his girlfriend now doesn't seem bad or very forced, on the contrary it isn't forced but I think it's the question of what is the right time to ask for a date the issue here is that sometimes it's never the right time you pray for a miracle and then you jump in he saw this as the right time and it was for a chance that this problem and also danger appeared so if you see it from my point of view then it wasn't forced then sir. Author, keep it up, the chapter is well written.
ch 206 Unforseen
Movies · NewComer714
I don't think the author is forcing it, he has a very valid point and you notice that during the other chapters they have an attraction for each other so the fact that he is asking her to be his girlfriend now doesn't seem bad or very forced, on the contrary it isn't forced but I think it's the question of what is the right time to ask for a date the issue here is that sometimes it's never the right time you pray for a miracle and then you jump in he saw this as the right time and it was for a chance that this problem and also danger appeared so if you see it from my point of view then it wasn't forced then sir. Author, keep it up, the chapter is well written.
ch 206 Unforseen
Movies · NewComer714
When does the next chapter come out, what is the schedule?
ch 0 3 Chapter 03 - Training 01!
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
NCIS: Naval Criminal Investigative Service
I agree don't rewrite the story continue the character should Take this as a lesson and use this feeling to leverage and become stronger
ch 19 Question? (not a chapter)
TV · a_BMO
I agree don't rewrite the story continue the character should Take this as a lesson and use this feeling to leverage and become stronger
ch 19 Question? (not a chapter)
TV · a_BMO
thanks for chapter
ch 13 Christmas and the Ball
Book&Literature · FanFictionForge
I don't think it would be appropriate to use the killing curse because it would impact both girls even if it didn't impact Wednesday, it would really impact the other blonde girl a lot although it would if we look at it from another interesting angle but I don't think it would be appropriate.
ch 17 Harvest Festival III
TV · a_BMO
ok
ch 19 Product 18 - Cliche Novel
Anime & Comics · Satella_Lust
Nice
ch 19 Product 18 - Cliche Novel
Anime & Comics · Satella_Lust
Yes
ch 220 Kamishiro Kotone (Part 3) **
Anime & Comics · Abhii_28
Roselie
ch 15 Umm Question?
Movies · Flaming_Lines
I don't think he should break up with her, I think it wouldn't be right.
ch 152 HWI 152
Movies · pujimaki
I don't think he should break up with her, I think it wouldn't be right.
ch 152 HWI 152
Movies · pujimaki
I have a question, the schedule still holds, we will have a new chapter this Thursday?.
ch 11 Massacre (Revised)
Anime & Comics · Aphis
the writing is great, the story is incredible, I just disagree with all the people who are posting in the comments disagreeing about the character choosing the ring, having three chapters of that alone, because firstly, if it was just him developing the games, it would be very boring, it would be something repeated and which we have seen in other stories very often even repeated secondly it is in the synopsis romance so there will be these moments to be able to complement and give meaning to the story because without it it would be very empty and thirdly plus the main point an engagement is one of the moments most memorable in a woman's life, second only to marriage and the birth of a child in these 3 chapters we see the character taking time to choose, especially because you don't choose any ring in these three chapters he is thinking about the feeling in her personality and which one suits her her and how it would look on her finger so it's justified without it it wouldn't be any different to any other story we've seen it would just be repeated without these romantic moments just like the moments of him creating the games it's what brings the romance to life you can't have one without the other refers to the engagement and the ring, whoever is married or who has already been married knows what I'm talking about, it's a milestone for life, never forget it
ch 60 Ideas
Video Games · NewComer714
I don't think the author is forcing it, he has a very valid point and you notice that during the other chapters they have an attraction for each other so the fact that he is asking her to be his girlfriend now doesn't seem bad or very forced, on the contrary it isn't forced but I think it's the question of what is the right time to ask for a date the issue here is that sometimes it's never the right time you pray for a miracle and then you jump in he saw this as the right time and it was for a chance that this problem and also danger appeared so if you see it from my point of view then it wasn't forced then sir. Author, keep it up, the chapter is well written.
ch 206 Unforseen
Tycoon Actor in Hollywood
Movies · NewComer714